ext_25882: (Grail Bird)
nightdog_barks ([identity profile] nightdog-barks.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bironic 2006-12-30 12:28 am (UTC)

I'm with [livejournal.com profile] topaz_eyes -- I think it reads fine; "dreams" works very well for what House is thinking about and looking for, and this:

-- something about heat, and need, and Wilson,
And a sense of utter contentment possible only in dreams.


Is a particularly beautiful line.

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