Thanks. It was "piano" originally, and then it went through a few changes I can't remember and landed on "dreams."
Yes, on purpose -- those "extra" two lines belonged subject-wise with the preceding stanza, while the last four belonged together. Did you find it very distracting?
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Yes, on purpose -- those "extra" two lines belonged subject-wise with the preceding stanza, while the last four belonged together. Did you find it very distracting?