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Fic! "Substitute," John/Rod (SGA), NC-17
Jan. 17th, 2008 07:34 amI wrote something last night! Start to finish! And I like it! It was for ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
oxoniensis's Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) for the prompt: "John/Rod, swing." Who knew that "it's only a quickie porn-fest" and "this can't be more than 4300 characters" would be the combination of restrictions that got the job done? They kept me from worrying about plot and characterization and sentence structure and from adding all the details I constantly wanted to—if left to my own devices, this would probably be a third again as long and have a different ending, and I'd still be picking over things like having used "flexed" in two places or "against" twice in as many sentences. Instead, it's done, done, done!
Title: Substitute
Pairing: John/Rod
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Kink (object insertion)
Spoilers: None, but you'll probably want to have seen "McKay and Mrs. Miller" for this to make sense.
Word Count: 747
Disclaimer: I'm just borrowing them to play.
A/N: Big hugs todaasgrrl for giving this a once-over before I posted last night, and to topaz_eyes for pushing me to write yesterday and providing the link to the Battle that finally convinced me to give it a try.
Read it there or here:
( John fought the urge to push back against it, to just take it in as far as he could, writhe shamelessly around it until he came, groaning and shaking. )
oxoniensis's Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) for the prompt: "John/Rod, swing." Who knew that "it's only a quickie porn-fest" and "this can't be more than 4300 characters" would be the combination of restrictions that got the job done? They kept me from worrying about plot and characterization and sentence structure and from adding all the details I constantly wanted to—if left to my own devices, this would probably be a third again as long and have a different ending, and I'd still be picking over things like having used "flexed" in two places or "against" twice in as many sentences. Instead, it's done, done, done!Title: Substitute
Pairing: John/Rod
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Kink (object insertion)
Spoilers: None, but you'll probably want to have seen "McKay and Mrs. Miller" for this to make sense.
Word Count: 747
Disclaimer: I'm just borrowing them to play.
A/N: Big hugs to
daasgrrl for giving this a once-over before I posted last night, and to topaz_eyes for pushing me to write yesterday and providing the link to the Battle that finally convinced me to give it a try. Read it there or here:
( John fought the urge to push back against it, to just take it in as far as he could, writhe shamelessly around it until he came, groaning and shaking. )
