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Happy birthday to me! Have a vid.

Title: Soccer Practice
Music: by Jonny McGovern (edited)
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: John/Ronon, with some John/Radek and John/Rodney; various cameos
Length: 2:40
Rating/Genre: PG-13, humor
Summary: John likes to do manly things. It's just that he wants to do them with Ronon.
A/N: Too late for [livejournal.com profile] satedan_grabass and Club Vivid, but just in time for natal celebrations. Many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] synn and [livejournal.com profile] deelaundry for feedback on earlier versions and for catching the typo.

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Abridged lyrics:

Hey dude
Hey dude, hey dude
Hey bro
Hey buddy
Hey dude
[whispered] Hey dude, hey dude

Hey dude, I was thinking we could go do
Something dirty, yeah
(x2)

Uh, I don't know, man
I mean I like to do manly things
You know just manly guys
Do manly things
You know what I mean?

Listen
I like to do manly things but
I like baby to do them with you
I was thinking we could go do
Something dirty, yeah
Da da da da dirty, yeah

Dirty? Well, like what?

Sorta like soccer practice
With the water polo team
Do some track and field
On the football green
Go to the locker room
Do some weight training
Dude it would be real hot
If we join the Army

Soccer practice
Soc soc soc soc soccer practice
Soc, soc, soc

I'm a dirty frat boy
On a dirty soccer team
Go into the locker room
After wrestling
(x2)

I was there
Cuz my buddy's down
There is nothin' wrong with
Helpin' a buddy out
Yes
(x2)

With soccer practice
With the water polo team
Do some track and field
On the football green
Go to the locker room
Do some weight training
Dude it would be real hot
If we join the Army

Marines, Air Force, of course
Yes, sir

Soccer practice
Soc soc soc soccer practice

Wait a minute, dude
You're not talking about joining the army
Or soccer practice at all, are you?

You're right
I'm not

All right, boys, shower up.





*

Concrit is always welcome as I try to improve my vidding.

x-posted to sga_noticeboard, sheppard_dex and atlantis_vids

This vid has shown at: con.txt 2012 and Loncon 2014
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Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com
Ahahahaha AWESOME.

You have found every potentially dirty look between these two, omg.

"I'm a dirty frat boy / on a dirty soccer team" cracked me right up.

Of course, I like to think that Ronon knew what John meant all along, and was just playing dumb because it was fun to get John going. *g*

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilly-the-kid.livejournal.com
Oh, this is great!!! The way John looks down at the end saying "you're right" and the looks before and right after... Priceless!!
Well, I guess, I have to watch it again now...
:)

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 09:43 pm (UTC)
ext_2047: (Default)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
*g* You know, it was tough to decide whether to have John convince Ronon or Ronon convince John. In the end, what tipped the scales was a friend's recommendation and the fact that the "I dunno, man"'s voice sounds so like Ronon's.

Glad you enjoyed! There were even a few more silly exchanges that didn't make it in, but I think these fit best. So happy to hear that the dirty frat boy made you laugh, too. :)

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 09:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks! Sometimes scanning through episodes for a certain kind of clip turns up something totally unexpected and snort-worthy taken out of context - in that case, what looks like John getting caught checking out Ronon in "Submerged."

So glad you enjoyed this. It was lots of fun to make.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaffsie.livejournal.com
Oh my god. My week's been made, and it's only Monday.

That vid is both hilarious and perfect for John and Ronon. :D

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deelaundry.livejournal.com
Vividcon will be sad they missed this!! It's hilarious and hot and gorgeous. Great work.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mz-bstone.livejournal.com
I have no concrit, just gales of laughter.

Soccer practice, indeed.

B

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilly-the-kid.livejournal.com
"Sometimes scanning through episodes for a certain kind of clip turns up something totally unexpected and snort-worthy taken out of context"
That's the great thing about vidding, you can never truly predict the outcome! :)

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penknife.livejournal.com
That's awesome.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:14 pm (UTC)
ext_25882: (Red Devil)
From: [identity profile] nightdog-barks.livejournal.com
I was there
Cuz my buddy's down
There is nothin' wrong with
Helpin' a buddy out
Yes


LOL, for real! Oh, John ... you get around, don't you? The quick cuts/edits in this are just awesome.

And happy birthday!

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:21 pm (UTC)
ext_2047: (john air quotes)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Hurrah! Thanks. I did start the one you voted for, but only got the first 15 seconds done before this one beckoned.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] idk-ok.livejournal.com
lmao A+

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com
That was the bomb and I laughed so hard. You captured every dirty look, mischievous expression and innuendo. I know this took a lot of time, but it was awesome.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] zillah975
Ahhhahahahahahahahaomg this is awesome! :D :D :D Downloading now, thank you for posting links!

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks for the comment! Glad this cracked you up.

I only recently learned how to vid properly, so now I can tell you with confidence that the download file is better quality than the streaming link, for sure.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] zillah975
I just d/l'd the large version and it's terrific!! \o/

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:26 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Sweet! Thanks so much. It did take many sittings to put together, but I'd been thinking about it for months so it could have been worse. :) Glad you liked it!

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:27 pm (UTC)

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:28 pm (UTC)

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thank you. ♥

I'm so glad you liked this. Sometimes the cutting was a b*tch to get right - I still think there are patches that don't quite work - but others fell into place like a dream - like Michael's lizard-monster falling twice to the beat, and the ZPM hand-off like a dance video. I guess that's what real vidders mean when they talk about motion and choreography. :)

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! May there be more fun in store for you later in the week anyway.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
*hug* Thanks again for helping out with this.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carolyn-claire.livejournal.com
That's so...dirty. Heee! Loved it.

Date: Jul. 26th, 2010 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com
OMG, this is fabulous!!! *flails*
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