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Vidlet!

Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairings: Radek, John, Ronon, Jennifer, and tentacles
Rating: PG-13
Length: 57 sec.
Contains: Heavy implication of tentacle sex, dubcon, John on his knees
Acknowledgements: The idea to use breathing instead of music came from a vid called "Hands" by [livejournal.com profile] newkidfan that used heartbeats (and that may no longer be online). And I stole adapted the quick fade in/fade out technique from [livejournal.com profile] thedeadparrot's beautiful ST III vid Searching.
A/N: "The Seed" was just begging for this. Happily, [livejournal.com profile] kink_bingo came along with its "tentacles" square. Sorry for the watermark; my S5 DVDs accidentally got shipped to another state.


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x-posted to sga_noticeboard and atlantis_vids


Arbitrary mod prize yay! Germination by [livejournal.com profile] thingswithwings


 
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Date: Aug. 16th, 2009 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theonlymeyouget.livejournal.com
Like the effects!

....that was strangely arousing. I'm not sure how to feel about that. ;)

Date: Aug. 16th, 2009 10:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Ha. Then my job here is done.

Thanks!

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deelaundry.livejournal.com
Oooooh.

I...

No, just oooooh.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 02:35 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
You see the mischief I get up to when I go to bed on time on Saturday nights? Tragic!

:D

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 03:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] perspi.livejournal.com
OH WOW OK YEAH THAT WORKED. HOLY COW THAT WORKED. :)

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 11:25 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
\o/

Thanks so much for the other music rec, btw! I was very close to using it, but then the search for breath effects turned up something useful.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seekergeek.livejournal.com
You win at kinky!

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:11 pm (UTC)
ext_2047: (tentacle wrist)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Hurrah!

Thanks. :)

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beautybecks.livejournal.com
I will never be able to watch "the seed" in the same way ever again. And Rodney missed out on the tentacle porn, as did Teyla, but I doubt they minded. It does seem more of a John and a Ronon thing to get themselves into. They'd probably enjoy it too. I think I'm babbling because I don't really know what to say. I watched tentacle!porn. Very well edited. But still tentacle!porn. I think I'm in shock. I din't think it would be so... real. Wow!

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
I'm sorry to have corrupted you, and yet at the same time not sorry at all! :) Thanks for watching, and for the comment.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thingswithwings.livejournal.com
okay, this is FABULOUS. I love how you just went for it, the heavy-breathing audio, the fade-in-fade-out transitions, the orgasm faces . . . it's totally hot, and totally what The Seed deserved to have done to it, I say. I love it! Oh, a tentacles vid! You've made me a very very happy KB mod. :D

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Whee! Thanks so much.

(Although you have to admit, "The Seed" didn't need to have much done to it to produce tentacle sex.)

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jdr1184.livejournal.com
Yea for vaguely inappropriate hottness. *grins*

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Indeed! Thanks for watching.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 02:15 pm (UTC)
ratcreature: RatCreature is molested by tentacles. (tentacles)
From: [personal profile] ratcreature
Yeah, there's the reason The Seed inspired me to make a tentacle rape icon...

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:15 pm (UTC)
ext_2047: (tentacle wrist)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Seriously, it was right there on screen. :)

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penknife.livejournal.com
*g* Oh, show. This made my morning.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
I'm so happy to hear it! Thank you.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catilinarian.livejournal.com
Wow. Okay. I don't think I've ever seen something that's not (overtly/originally intended to be) sexual so brilliantly eroticised with such a light touch.

Well done.

I'll have you know that your tentacle porn is still the only tentacle porn I've ever read/watched, and I actually really enjoyed it. My innocence is shattered forever, &c, but I'm not terribly concerned. :)

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
I'd say it was overtly sexual without having been intended to be. :) And I am pleased as punch to hear that I am (so far) your sole supplier of tentacle wrongness.

Thank you, dahhhlink!

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 05:46 pm (UTC)
copracat: botanical illustration with text 'no sermons in stone' (no sermons)
From: [personal profile] copracat
That was really, really, really creepy, particularly the non-Hollywoodness of the soundtrack. It sounded like a human breathing, not an actor breathing if that makes sense? It sounded real. Great work.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks very much. It might well have been a non-actor doing the breathing -- it came from a sound effects site that may include clips from "amateur" producers. I'm glad to hear it contributed to the tone of the vid. It is super-creepy, isn't it? And yet also hot, depending on your POV and how you see the characters experiencing what's going on.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 05:51 pm (UTC)

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
*g* Thanks!

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cupidsbow.livejournal.com
That's really clever.

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toomuchfandom.livejournal.com
Oh... rawr... Good Job!

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:19 pm (UTC)

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cjandre.livejournal.com
okay, WOW.

I didn't really see that when I saw the ep.

Glad you did though.

:->

Date: Aug. 17th, 2009 09:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
You know how some people watch an episode and say there's no way you can't see McShep there? I watched "The Seed" and didn't see any way you couldn't see tentacle porn there. Actually, I'm surprised something like this hasn't been done all over the place before. :)

Anyway, thank you!

Date: Aug. 18th, 2009 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gottalovev.livejournal.com
ha! well that's extremely well done, works so well with the breathing. and yep, you managed to make it hot, go you! lol!

Date: Aug. 20th, 2009 10:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed and that the hotness came through. :)

Date: Aug. 18th, 2009 01:22 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] thedeadparrot.livejournal.com
Dude, steal away, because this is awesome and a little unsettling.

And yeah, "The Seed" was basically the tentacle porn episode.

Date: Aug. 20th, 2009 10:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Totally. And thanks so much. Radek's still legs and John's traumatized face do make it a little creepier than I intended, but I guess that's also hard to avoid when you're dealing with tentacles.

Date: Aug. 20th, 2009 09:03 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - the new motto)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
I am just now getting around to watching this, and OMG.

You and your sexy tentacles! ::shakes fist::

Date: Aug. 20th, 2009 10:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
\o/

You know, I've been toying with the idea of adding random funny "testimonials" to my profile page, and your second line here is a great candidate.

Date: Aug. 22nd, 2009 03:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com
oh, wow, very, incredibly disturbing, and yet also awesome.

you did a fabulous job of bringing out the tentacle porn that we all know was at the heart of "the Seed". There was a reason I went cross-eyed when I watched that ep....

Date: Aug. 28th, 2009 04:02 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ariadne83
Ooh, this is... intriguing.

Date: Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:13 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
*waggles eyebrows*

Thank you!

Date: Aug. 29th, 2009 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livrelibre.livejournal.com
I heart you so hard right now:)

Date: Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:14 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Aw. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It was perhaps a little too fun to make. Thanks for watching!

Date: Sep. 1st, 2009 10:35 am (UTC)
ext_230: a tiny green frog on a very red leaf (shiny things)
From: [identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
hahahaah, priceless. Thank you for this! The Seed was indeed begging for it. :)

Date: Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:13 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
And we gave it what it wanted. :) Thank you! Kink Bingo makes me happy for bringing more tentacle fanworks into the world.

Date: Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com
"The Seed" made me roll my eyes a lot when it aired, but this vidlet is awesome, because it takes all of the weird porny subtext of everyone on the show being penetrated by tentacles and makes it text. \o/

Date: Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Pssh, as if it weren't text already.

:) Thanks a bunch. I don't know WTF the showrunners were thinking that week, but this was deliciously fun to make.

Date: Sep. 2nd, 2009 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elizabeth perry (from livejournal.com)
I am laughing SO HARD over this. SO HARD.

Date: Sep. 3rd, 2009 02:29 am (UTC)
ext_2047: (tentacle wrist)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
*g* Glad you enjoyed!

Date: Sep. 3rd, 2009 12:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mific.livejournal.com
Wonderfully creepy-hot, and a spoof on The Seed to boot. The heavy breathing was inspired.

Date: Sep. 3rd, 2009 11:13 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Heh. I hadn't thought of it as a spoof so much as... highlighting what was already there? I like the idea, though - thanks! And thanks for the comment about the breathing. Finding tentacle-ish music was tough. I was going to go for the beginning of NIN's .... I've just forgotten the title, but the one the infamous Kirk/Spock vid was set to, with the chorus "I want to f*ck you like an animal," something something... anyway, but it would have just cut off, so I tried for a riff on newkidfan's heartbeat idea and found the breath while poking around in some sound effects archives. A little light audio editing to get the right length and climax effects, et voila.

TMI?

Thanks again for watching and telling me what you thought!
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