bironic: Neil Perry gazing out a window at night (RSL neil window)
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Ugh, why am I awake right now. Well, might as well post this! I made it last night as a mood-booster after (long story short) a day's effort to replace my ailing car was thwarted by two pieces of paper.


Title: Satisfaction
Fandom: Peanuts animations
Pairing: Charlie Brown and Lucy
Music: "(I Can't Get No) Satisfaction" by The Rolling Stones (edited)
Length: 1 m 27 sec
Rating: PG for footage, PG-13 for connotation
Summary: Charlie Brown just can't get satisfaction. Luckily Snoopy is there to help.
Physical trigger warning: The picture shakes several times when Charlie Brown hits the ground.
A/N: For my Kink Bingo square "orgasm denial/control." Yes, that's right. It is not even in the row I'm doing, except now I'm going to have to do that row. "Historical roleplay" is going to be fun, too. Stay tuned. Clip at the end is from the Charlie Brown and Snoopy Show episode "Chaos in the Classroom."



Streaming on YouTube and Vimeo (for as long as the music police don't find it) and downloadable here (mp4, 6.2 MB).





There are captions on the YouTube version; you should be able to toggle them on and off with the CC button. Here are the lyrics typed out:

I can't get no satisfaction
I can't get no satisfaction
'cause I try and I try and I try and I try
I can't get no
I can’t get no

No, no, no
Hey, hey, hey
That's what I say

I can't get no satisfaction
I can't get no girlie action
'cause I try and I try and I try and I try
I can't get no
I can't get no



Clip: "You hold the ball, I come running up to kick it, and then you pull it away. There has to be something deeply symbolic in that. I've thought about it and thought about it. Somehow, though, I missed the symbolism."



ETA: Death of the author/vidder etc. etc., but given the metaphor, wanted to say for the record that this isn't meant to be read as condoning violence against women or justifying payback for "teasing." Yes? Yes.

Comments and concrit are always welcome as I try to improve my vidding. This time I am hand-waving the differing footage quality, as I swiped everything from YouTube. Did my best to get the aspect ratios the same, at least.

x-posted to vidding.

My Bingo card

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 09:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damigella-314.livejournal.com
This was so great. Awesome. Thanks for teaching me that there needn't be smut in filling a kink bingo square, although I currently need kink-bingo-fueled smut to address several issues I've been avoiding.

FYI, the fic that was prompted from your essay will soon hit the 30K words bar (my longest yet) and is still unfinished. Thanks, I think :).

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 10:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Oh, my goodness. Good luck!

And thanks. This was a lot of fun to brainstorm and put together. I think at least 85% of the fun was just thinking about it through the lens of the Bingo square. :)

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damigella-314.livejournal.com
I have a stupid OT question. What is one supposed to do after completing a kink-bingo row? So far I just posted the various fics to my own lj + otherwise relevant comms. [No, I haven't completed a row yet. But I feel close - I have 3 and a 4th is being beta read.]
Thanks!
Edited Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 10:55 am (UTC)

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 11:05 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Sure. When you're done, you use the posting template (http://kink-bingo.dreamwidth.org/tag/admin:+posting+round+four) to post your five fills to the comm. Here are the rules (http://kink-bingo.dreamwidth.org/254368.html) as well for reference.

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Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 12:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
qsdf;qjfg:sdfgnhnkfg THIS IS SO GREAT. OMG. I LOVE IT. AND YOU.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 01:10 pm (UTC)

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 01:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] giandujakiss.livejournal.com
Heh, that's hilarious! Fantastic fill!

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 01:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks! It was too wrong not to do.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmine-shassie.livejournal.com
that's so funny, i really enjoyed it

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 02:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Thanks!
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Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaila.livejournal.com
Ha! I am far more charmed by this than I think is reasonable. Clever and hilarious!

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 02:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Ah, thanks! To reference your icon, I am glad you are the audience and not Daria in this scenario. :)

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellen-fremedon.livejournal.com
Hee! That was adorable, and I will never be able to look at Lucy and the football the same way again.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 03:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Excellent. My work here is done.

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Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crysothemis.livejournal.com
Ahahahahah!

That is just beautiful.

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:13 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
:D Thanks! I'm so glad enjoyed it!

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] some-stars.livejournal.com
This is AMAZING. What a brilliant idea!

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Hee, thank you very much! I don't even remember where the idea came from, but it had to be made.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toft-froggy.livejournal.com
That's really genius.

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
I am glad you think so! It was a lot of fun to make. Thanks for the rec, too. <3

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 04:42 pm (UTC)
northern: "northern" written in gray text across a raven (Default)
From: [personal profile] northern
That is fucking awesome. Wheeeee!

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Ha, excellent to hear. Thanks!

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bitter-crimson.livejournal.com
lololol, <3<3

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
:D Thanks.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] topaz-eyes.livejournal.com
This is all kinds of awesome! The end clip is perfect. ;-D

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 06:15 pm (UTC)
ext_2047: (wilson smile)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
I don't know if this kink is what the writer(s) had in mind, but I actually would not be shocked if it were.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 06:37 pm (UTC)
axiom_of_stripe: DC Comics: Kory cries "X'Hal!" (Default)
From: [personal profile] axiom_of_stripe (from livejournal.com)
this is so wrong that it's very, very right. thank you! :)

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
That is exactly what I kept thinking as I brainstormed and put it together. Heh. Thanks!

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chalcopyrite.livejournal.com
That's one of the funnier KB fills I have seen. Bravo!

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:10 am (UTC)
ext_2047: (hi willow)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Oh, hooray! Thanks so much.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhoboat.livejournal.com
So awesome, hee!

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
:) Thanks!

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com
This makes me laugh my *ass* off. Beautiful! Oh, Charlie Brown.

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Heeee. Oh, Charlie Brown, indeed.

Date: Jun. 12th, 2011 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sasha-feather.livejournal.com
This is amazing!!!

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 01:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
*g* Excellent! Thanks so much.

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 03:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomedet.livejournal.com
*dies laughing*

Date: Jun. 15th, 2011 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
*resurrects you for a happy Snoopy dance*

Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coyotegestalt.livejournal.com
Hee! When one of my housemates told me they'd found a C/L vid for King Bingo, I was a little frightened... and this turned out to be wonderful!

Date: Jun. 15th, 2011 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Excellent! Glad to hear it.

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Date: Jun. 13th, 2011 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cee-m.livejournal.com
LMAO!!! That was hilarious!~

Date: Jun. 15th, 2011 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Yay, thanks!

Date: Jun. 14th, 2011 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlady38.livejournal.com
*snorts* Awesome. And you got in the Great Pumpkin scene! "It was never notarized!"

Date: Jun. 15th, 2011 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Hee, I worked in everything I could find. Thank goodness for YouTube. :) Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: Sep. 14th, 2011 08:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sdwolfpup.livejournal.com
Haaaaa, okay that totally made me laugh. Good job!

Date: Sep. 15th, 2011 01:34 am (UTC)
ext_2047: (marsters laugh)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
Awesome! It was a lot of fun to make, and it's been fun to get laughs in return.

Date: Oct. 15th, 2011 04:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thingswithwings.livejournal.com
Finally got around to watching this, and I loved it! Adorable and hilarious and, surprisingly, just a little hot!

Date: Oct. 15th, 2011 05:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
I know I haven't been able to look at the football scenes in the same way since the match-up occurred to me, heh. Glad you took a look!

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